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Busy Izzie - Draft 7 by Milethia Thomas, written for Twisted50, uploaded 12 Jul '16 20:19 @cannybairn1

Izzie just has to touch the dolls.

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Hi Milethia,

Elinor here - your designated editor!

 

I have very little to suggest for your excellent story, except to have one more pass over it and maybe trim a little here and there.

  • For example, you could cut the references to 'boring house documents' and Aunt Delphie's desire to be walled up in the house - she's already strange!
  • Don't be afraid to cut down on adjectives.

19th July 2016

Hi Milethia,

nice one! Your story is LOCKED!

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Busy Izzie - Draft 6 by Milethia Thomas, written for Twisted50, uploaded 10 Jul '16 18:07 @cannybairn1

Izzie just has to touch the dolls.

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Busy Izzie - Draft 5 by Milethia Thomas, written for Twisted50, uploaded 09 Jul '16 15:54 @cannybairn1

Izzie just has to touch the dolls.

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Busy Izzie - Draft 4 by Milethia Thomas, written for Twisted50, uploaded 30 Nov '15 00:13 @cannybairn1

Izzie just has to touch the dolls.

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Busy Izzie - Draft 3 by Milethia Thomas, written for Twisted50, uploaded 21 Nov '15 10:29 @cannybairn1

Izzie just has to touch the dolls.

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Busy Izzie - Draft 2 by Milethia Thomas, written for Twisted50, uploaded 01 Nov '15 17:55 @cannybairn1

Izzie just has to touch the dolls.

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Busy Izzie - Draft 1 by Milethia Thomas, written for Twisted50, uploaded 08 Jun '15 21:38

Izzie just has to touch the dolls.

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