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The writer has delivered their final draft.

A Change Too Far - Draft 2 by Adam Millard, written for Twisted50, uploaded 17 May '16 10:01 @adammillard

We're only human...aren't we?

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Publisher and editor notes

Hi Adam,
Elinor here - editor at Twisted50.
I have a couple of notes on your wonderful story.

  • Could you bear to expand it very slightly? I enjoyed its brevity and imagery but feel it could stand a little more detail - maybe in its choice and ingestion of the ideal victim...

The draft below is now closed for feedback.

Please read and review the latest draft above.

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A Change Too Far - Draft 1 by Adam Millard, written for Twisted50, uploaded 11 Jun '15 18:16

We're only human...aren't we?

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