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The writer has delivered their final draft.

A Change Too Far - Draft 2 by Adam Millard, written for Twisted50, uploaded 17 May '16 10:01 @adammillard

We're only human...aren't we?

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Publisher and editor notes

Hi Adam,
Elinor here - editor at Twisted50.
I have a couple of notes on your wonderful story.

  • Could you bear to expand it very slightly? I enjoyed its brevity and imagery but feel it could stand a little more detail - maybe in its choice and ingestion of the ideal victim...

The draft below is now closed for feedback.

Please read and review the latest draft above.

Normal 2010 12 26 20.51.52

A Change Too Far - Draft 1 by Adam Millard, written for Twisted50, uploaded 11 Jun '15 18:16

We're only human...aren't we?

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