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A Curious Boy - Draft 3 by Joshua Saltzman, written for Twisted50, uploaded 11 Jul '16 12:58 @joshsaltzman

A snow storm. A stranger. A box. And one bored little boy.

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Publisher and editor notes

Hey Josh, no edit notes for you, we love your story, a great cautionary tale indeed. 

I do however offer you the opportunity to re read your story out loud to yourself, and see if you identify any little moments where you could tighten it up and make it even more awesome than it already is! 

The draft below is now closed for feedback.

Please read and review the latest draft above.

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A Curious Boy - Draft 2 by Joshua Saltzman, written for Twisted50, uploaded 04 Jul '16 14:07 @joshsaltzman

A snow storm. A stranger. A box. And one bored little boy.

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The draft below is now closed for feedback.

Please read and review the latest draft above.

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A Curious Boy - Draft 1 by Joshua Saltzman, written for Twisted50, uploaded 13 Aug '15 20:43 @joshsaltzman

A snow storm. A stranger. A box. And one bored little boy.

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