The writer has delivered their final draft.
An unearthly event occurs on the fifth anniversary of our children's disappearance.
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Publisher and editor notes
Gareth, great speaking to you today. Your chilling tale is desperately upsetting. Only a few notes for you:
Read your story out loud - listen to your words and tighten up your story, especially typos.
Consider a few subtle words to reveal where Mary has gone.
Consider revealing the reason behind the sudden anger from the twins.
Great stuff Gareth, some carefully placed words will pack a powerful punch. Off to hug my kids now...