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True Fear - Draft 7 by Gareth Eynon (G.P.Eynon), written for Twisted50, uploaded 09 Jun '16 11:14 @gpeynon

An unearthly event occurs on the fifth anniversary of our children's disappearance.

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Publisher and editor notes

Gareth, great speaking to you today. Your chilling tale is desperately upsetting. Only a few notes for you:

Read your story out loud - listen to your words and tighten up your story, especially typos.

Consider a few subtle words to reveal where Mary has gone.

Consider revealing the reason behind the sudden anger from the twins. 

Great stuff Gareth, some carefully placed words will pack a powerful punch. Off to hug my kids now...

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True Fear - Draft 6 by Gareth Eynon (G.P.Eynon), written for Twisted50, uploaded 06 Jun '16 07:58 @gpeynon

An unearthly event occurs on the fifth anniversary of our children's disappearance.

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True Fear - Draft 5 by Gareth Eynon (G.P.Eynon), written for Twisted50, uploaded 29 May '16 13:20 @gpeynon

An unearthly event occurs on the fifth anniversary of our children's disappearance.

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True Fear - Draft 4 by Gareth Eynon (G.P.Eynon), written for Twisted50, uploaded 24 Nov '15 19:06 @gpeynon

An unearthly event occurs on the fifth anniversary of our children's disappearance.

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True Fear - Draft 3 by Gareth Eynon (G.P.Eynon), written for Twisted50, uploaded 13 Nov '15 12:56 @gpeynon

An unearthly event occurs on the fifth anniversary of our children's disappearance.

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Gareth Eynon - Draft 2 by Gareth Eynon (G.P.Eynon), written for Twisted50, uploaded 04 Sep '15 07:25 @gpeynon

An unearthly event occurs on the fifth anniversary of our children's disappearance.

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True Fear - Draft 1 by Gareth Eynon (G.P.Eynon), written for Twisted50, uploaded 02 Sep '15 19:28 @gpeynon

An unearthly event occurs on the fifth anniversary of our children's disappearance.

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