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doG liveD - Draft 3 by Garry Moore (Troll Dahl), written for Twisted50, uploaded 22 Jun '16 13:33 @shamfilms

A young woman discovers something growing inside her after a horrific dream

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Publisher and editor notes

Hi Gary,

as I emailed earlier:

  • Let us feel what lili is feeling in those terrible final moments.

But other than that - perfect!

The draft below is now closed for feedback.

Please read and review the latest draft above.

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doG liveD - Draft 2 by Garry Moore (Troll Dahl), written for Twisted50, uploaded 02 Oct '15 10:09 @shamfilms

A young woman discovers something growing inside her after a horrific dream

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The draft below is now closed for feedback.

Please read and review the latest draft above.

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doG liveD - Draft 1 by Garry Moore (Troll Dahl), written for Twisted50, uploaded 02 Sep '15 20:58 @shamfilms

A young woman discovers something growing inside her after a horrific dream

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