The writer has delivered their final draft.
A deserted playground with a dark reputation plays host to a mysterious visitor.
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Elinor here. As I mentioned in my email, I think the tiniest edits at the end would be grand, where the ghost-boy is telling Jamie what's about to happen to the little girls. Less is more...
Other than that, great work!
14th July 2016
Hi Gareth, your story is LOCKED! Congratulations.