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The Swing - Draft 5 by Gareth Eynon (G.P.Eynon), written for Twisted50, uploaded 04 Jul '16 18:35 @gpeynon

A deserted playground with a dark reputation plays host to a mysterious visitor.

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Hi Gareth,

Elinor here. As I mentioned in my email, I think the tiniest edits at the end would be grand, where the ghost-boy is telling Jamie what's about to happen to the little girls. Less is more...

Other than that, great work!

14th July 2016

Hi Gareth, your story is LOCKED! Congratulations.

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The Swing - Draft 4 by Gareth Eynon (G.P.Eynon), written for Twisted50, uploaded 29 Nov '15 09:44 @gpeynon

A deserted playground with a dark reputation plays host to a mysterious visitor.

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The Swing - Draft 3 by Gareth Eynon (G.P.Eynon), written for Twisted50, uploaded 26 Nov '15 10:43 @gpeynon

A deserted playground with a dark reputation plays host to a mysterious visitor.

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The Swing - Draft 2 by Gareth Eynon (G.P.Eynon), written for Twisted50, uploaded 20 Nov '15 19:49 @gpeynon

A deserted playground with a dark reputation plays host to a mysterious visitor.

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The Swing - Draft 1 by Gareth Eynon (G.P.Eynon), written for Twisted50, uploaded 03 Nov '15 11:44 @gpeynon

A deserted playground with a dark reputation plays host to a mysterious visitor.

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NOTE: Some DOCX files have an incompatibility with Google Reader. Please use the Download button if you cannot read online. If you do not have Microsoft Word you can download the MS Word viewer HERE or we would recommend one of the free alternatives to MS Office such as LibreOffice or OpenOffice.