The writer has delivered their final draft.
The Biggest Fear - Draft 5
written for Twisted50,
uploaded 25 May '16 12:07
Everyone fears death, but some have a better reason than others.
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Publisher and editor notes
Shirley, great talking to you today and hearing all about this world you have created! As discussed, the main point of conflict between Mrs Porter and the twin doesn't properly come across, which then throws up a number of questions. So, we ask you to focus on these two points:
- The conflict between the old woman and the twin.
- The story world and the logistics of the 'jumping'.
I look forward to reading the next draft Shirley, you have a remarkable story here.