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Gooseberry Pie - Draft 6 by Jessica Brown (bessjrown), written for Twisted50, uploaded 02 Jun '16 08:57 @Bess_jrown

An old lady lovingly bakes a pie for her dear husband...

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Publisher and editor notes

We love your deliciously twisted Edna! As discussed, a couple of notes for you:

  • Read your story out loud and listen out for repetitions.
  • Consider cutting the repetitive words or use a thesaurus. 
  • Tighten up the plausibility of the story - consider narrowing the time frame. 

Great stuff Jess!

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Gooseberry Pie - Draft 5 by Jessica Brown (bessjrown), written for Twisted50, uploaded 28 May '16 08:29

An old lady lovingly bakes a pie for her dear husband...

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Gooseberry Pie - Draft 4 by Jessica Brown (bessjrown), written for Twisted50, uploaded 30 Nov '15 21:10

An old lady lovingly bakes a pie for her dear husband...

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Gooseberry Pie - Draft 3 by Jessica Brown (bessjrown), written for Twisted50, uploaded 30 Nov '15 20:04

An old lady lovingly bakes a pie for her dear husband...

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Gooseberry Pie - Draft 2 by Jessica Brown (bessjrown), written for Twisted50, uploaded 16 Nov '15 14:54

An old lady lovingly bakes a pie for her dear husband...

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Gooseberry Pie - Draft 1 by Jessica Brown (bessjrown), written for Twisted50, uploaded 16 Nov '15 11:05

An old lady lovingly bakes a pie for her dear husband...

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