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The Beating Of My Heart - Draft 4 by Rachael Howard, written for Twisted50, uploaded 21 May '16 16:33

Sometimes hearing a beating heart is not enough to prove you are alive.

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Publisher and editor notes

Hey Rachael, as discussed, your story is devastating and we want that powerful punch at the end, so let's ramp up the tension.

  • Game changer point 1, rotting flesh - consider stepping up the tension from here.
  • Game changer point 2, eye ball rolling - ramp it up towards the big reveal. 

And then have us on our knees with your devastatingly awesome final line!

Great stuff Rachael!

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The Beating Of My Heart - Draft 3 by Rachael Howard, written for Twisted50, uploaded 28 Nov '15 20:21 @rachwrite

Sometimes hearing a beating heart is not enough to prove you are alive.

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The Beating Of My Heart - Draft 2 by Rachael Howard, written for Twisted50, uploaded 23 Nov '15 22:23 @rachwrite

Sometimes hearing a beating heart is not enough to prove you are alive.

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The Beating Of My Heart - Draft 1 by Rachael Howard, written for Twisted50, uploaded 18 Nov '15 20:30 @rachwrite

Sometimes hearing a beating heart is not enough to prove you are alive.

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