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Feedback - Draft 4 by Charles Maciejewski, written for Twisted50, uploaded 10 May '16 16:21

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Publisher and editor notes

Charles, a great chat with you today. We love your extremely clever and creepy story!

As discussed the last 2 messages from Colin  feel a little 'on the nose' (clichè intended, HA!).

  • Consider cutting the parts where you begin to explain his actions.
  • More insinuation could make it creepier. 

Great stuff, look forward to seeing a cracking ending.

 

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Feedback - Draft 3 by Charles Maciejewski, written for Twisted50, uploaded 30 Nov '15 20:01

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Feedback - Draft 2 by Charles Maciejewski, written for Twisted50, uploaded 22 Nov '15 18:06

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Feedback - Draft 1 by Charles Maciejewski, written for Twisted50, uploaded 21 Nov '15 12:21

Everyone's a critic

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