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Second Chance - Draft 2 by Maggie Innes, written for Twisted50, uploaded 11 May '16 13:09

A man, tormented and violently transformed after a heart transplant, is driven to track down his donor's widow, and possess her

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Publisher and editor notes.

Great chat today Maggie, we LOVE the twist in your story! Just a few notes for you to consider:

  • Your opening line, it sure is punchy, but as discussed, a little jarring.
  • Alison's eye colour changes.
  • Is there a typo on 'specially'?

Great stuff, looking forward to seeing this beauty locked off soon!

The draft below is now closed for feedback.

Please read and review the latest draft above.

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Second Chance - Draft 1 by Maggie Innes, written for Twisted50, uploaded 01 Dec '15 00:39

A man, tormented and violently transformed after a heart transplant, is driven to track down his donor's widow, and possess her

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