The writer has delivered their final draft.
Second Chance - Draft 2
written for Twisted50,
uploaded 11 May '16 13:09
A man, tormented and violently transformed after a heart transplant, is driven to track down his donor's widow, and possess her
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Publisher and editor notes.
Great chat today Maggie, we LOVE the twist in your story! Just a few notes for you to consider:
- Your opening line, it sure is punchy, but as discussed, a little jarring.
- Alison's eye colour changes.
- Is there a typo on 'specially'?
Great stuff, looking forward to seeing this beauty locked off soon!